U We chose to do writing camp or buddy challenge I did buddy challenge. I did it to entertain. This is my writing hope you get what I mean from "entertain". It is a day as a life.
Buddy challenge day
Hi my name is William the black lumpy soccer ball. It is buddy challenge day today and I am the ball in the massive rainbow silky parachute. I am getting launched up so high in the air that it feels like the sun is grabbing me and throwing me back down. People run at me and try to catch me before I hit the ground. There were people surrounding me like a herd of buffalos. Students are launching me up into the air over the fence or in the football goal. When I hit the ground so hard it felt like all the air in me went POOF! Then I see sam the green smooth plastic ball getting launched up too. The next moment we drop down to the earth and get a concussion. We are fetched by the students and throne back on the parachute. They launch us back into the air so high we almost faint in the air. We smile at each other next minute we fall to our deaths, na it doesn't end like that. We fall back into the parachute. They launch us back into the air we fall back into the ground with a thud. I see Sam with three birds flying around his head. “Hey William” said Sam. I sigh “wow”. Then the birds fly away. When Max (one of the students) puts us back on the parachute They say 3, 2, 1 launch. They launch us back into the air so high we saw the wall of China, then we landed on top of the football goal. Now it's lunch. Buddy challenge day is done. Everyone forgets about us and leaves us on the soccer goal. After 80 years we finally come down. We have mold and moss all over us. Then a new buddy challenge starts. Here we go again.
Feedback/feedforward: I like the way how your description was short but it explained everything but how ever I wonder if you could put more detail into it
Evaluation: I think I did in my storey but I will try to make it longer next time