Friday, 2 September 2016

Nic writing portfolio post

Description: In writing we got put into a group with a teacher. My group is with Nic. I am writing a story about when you switch talents with ronaldo. I haven't finished my story yet.


evaluation: I think i did well with my slide and my plan because my plan is good but messy.

feedback/feedforward: i think you did well in your slide but next time you could make you plan photos more visible. Sam ross

1 comment:

  1. William, you had a clear vision of your story and you can tell this by your drawings and writing. Your idea is a really big idea! But you are on the right track. Remember to plan your structure so you know where you are going in your story.