Monday, 29 June 2015

The Digestive system

Description: We have made a short movie about the science we discovered. We had to make sure every thing was good. So I hope you like our video.

Success Criteria
Our movie had 
*lots of interesting details about digestion that our audience won’t know
*clear explanations about each stage of the digestion process (talking clearly and loudly, using specific science vocabulary)
*clear images
*humour/interesting detail to keep the audience engaged
Big idea: The digestive system helps break the food down in tiny bits so it can fit. I will list some parts of the digestive system. Esophogaus, stomach, small intestines, large intestines ( caecum) and rectum.
Feedback: I like that you had your video humorous.
Feed Forward: You could add more information in your big idea. Tane

Evaluation: I think I did well because I had good humour. My next step is to add some fun facts;

Wednesday, 17 June 2015

Et reo with William and Finis

Description: Every week we do et reo. Et stands for Elly and Troy. We have been learning lunch box Te reo.  It has been fun doing this. Me and finis heave worked hard on this. So hope you like it.

Big idea: In the video ae means yes and kaōre means no. And these are are some of Maori fruit or veggies.

Panana- banana
Kareti- carrot
Nati nati- nuts
Hanawiti- sandwich
Ropere- stratberry
Taki- wrap
Āporo- apple
Ārani- orange
Wai ārani- orange juice
And that's it.

Feedback/feedforward: you did very well on you're video you must have worked hard. Next time clearer
Evaluation: I think I should make it one more sentence but I think I  did well on the video cause I pronounced it wright.

Thursday, 11 June 2015

Math portfolio sample

Description: In maths we are learning about strategy maths. We have four questions that we had to answer.

Big idea: I used strategy math because knowledge math is if you could do it in three seconds.

Evaluation: I think I did well because the working out was hard so i had to use all my strategies to figure it out.

feedback/feedfroward: next time you could make your maths bigger and easier to read but you did well at showing your ideas. gracie

Monday, 8 June 2015


Description: I am learning to write complex sentences. The sentences below in red are the complex sentences. Troy said you had to have a complex sentence in each paragraph. There is some complex sentences so I think you would enjoy it.

Big idea: The purpose of this is to make complex sentences and a cute video.
evaluation: I think I did well because it is funny and sad abit. I think I could make sure next time I put in more complex sentences. But other whys I think it's really could
feedback/feedforward: I liked how you started the writing like bark bark. Next time you could do more complex sentences. Finis

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Said is dead

Description: I have learning expand vocabulary for reading in class. I have made a poster saying quite a lot of words that mean said. In class we have been doing tic tac toes. It has been fun doing this poster so hope you like it. 

Succes criteria: to expand my vocabulary. I know I'm getting better because I listen well. I'm good at re reading and I need to improve on my read on cause I think I forget to do it.

Big idea: In expand vocabulary my goal is to expand my vocabulary.

evaluation:  I could put some more words in and I liked how I explained it.
feedback/feed forward:
i think you did good at doing the write font 
i think you need to improve on making your words clearer. Finis